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25 October 2009

How, I miss him?

It is a silent corner,
Where I sit, like a loser.
Sinking into the sweet past,
Cursing, why didn't the time last.

Every night, we'd made love.
Why isn't it the same, now?
Though, on the same bed, we sleep,
He doesn't hear me weep.

His kisses aren't warm, anymore.
Over me, he chose that whore.
Once, to look like her, I painted my face.
Yet, he remained in her embrace.

Every night, I sit in a silent corner.
Wondering about him and her.
Musing, should I tell him,
how, I miss him?

31 comments:

  1. it was a good one..I appreciate ur passion to keep blogging..u come out with updates very frequently..thats nice..an yeah the blog was good too..just like the typical nethra's stuff..

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  2. hey nethra...
    really very nice..khe khe khe...
    i jus love when u hav those rhymin words...

    musing shud i tell him
    how i miss him...

    wow... like it so much

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  3. Really a good one. I liked it a lot.

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  4. u r real actv blogger who write sumthn reading..among few i guess.as per me its amazing as like ur previous post..bt the best part was Sinking into the sweet past,
    Cursing, why didn't the time last.
    truly majestic lines..i too wrote a poem on breakup sumday bfore

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  5. Nice!! somehow it reminded me of the book, 'The Dancing Girls of Lahore' by Louise Brown...

    :)

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  6. love ur poems.. keep writing more...

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  7. Pretty decent, although it seemed a bit weird when I read "Once, to look like her, I painted my face" but I guess that's what is called poetic license. Keep writing :)

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  8. Your poems are really goood.........
    keeeeeep it om.
    :)

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  9. nice... rhyming was nice... sink more into the feeling and you will come up with few more intense lines.... like the last 2 lines a lot...

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  10. short .... story conveyed .... keep writing

    good one

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  11. hi buddy,

    Is it really him and her or something like laptop sort of gadget??.
    I liked the narration...it is simple and realistic....

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  12. hey nethra nice poem....simple nd touching :)
    but finished so early :(

    still like it :)

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  13. Hi...
    Am a first timer here!!!
    A very touching and beautiful poem indeed!!
    :-)

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  14. Very well written.. Full of pain and emotions.. Each and every word shouts out by itself, speaking of your love for him.. An enjoyable read.. Keep it flowing... :-)

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  15. hi nethra
    it was an excellent read, simple with its words and deep in meaning. I liked it a lot. Keep em coming :)

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  16. can feel that it's deep from your heart!! keep writing :)

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  17. aabb mostly in every stanza... every emotive poem

    Ashes

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  18. really nice but why so sad ? not anymore :). keep writing dear.

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  19. Hi buddy....

    Please do check my reply to your queries on "If I were a baby"...
    Something is waiting for you to accept...

    cheers,
    mahesh :)

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  20. I really loved this poem...It's touchin...

    True words....True feelings....

    Keep writing Nethra...=]

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  21. vry nice poem
    great work
    keep it up

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  22. @loveish
    Thanks for visiting my blog. :)

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  23. Hey thats an emotional package..Luvd it!

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